cool, please update soon

that chapter did not suck. This is a reall good story. You need to update as fast as you can. This is creative and Link is my favorite character. Good luck on your writing!

OMG so Awesome! More I want more

Awesome!! such an interestin idea X3 oh plz continue ^^ it's wonderful... can't wait how they meet & how would they react 2 each other... hehe keep it up ;)

Awesome! you did a really good job!

It did seem a little rushed. Did you know my sister's name is Katie? IRONY! I like the idea of it being more of a dormant gene than reincarnation though

Alana: Oh dear I do hope Link and the others can help her before she'll do something she more likely hate herslef for

Everything is in bold...did you know that? It's okay if you didn't I wouldn't blame you I'd blad the Doc Manager or whatever you want to call it.

This aint a reincarnation deal is it? i just thinking you're better than that to rely on such a...loophole

really good start on your story, i like it, keep up the good work!

Alana: Ooh nice I like this very much <3

This is a really great story so far. You write incredibley well. I can't wait to see more. XD

awesome! you rock zach!

I like it I like it I like it. Is there more on the way?

oh I like this so far! that first part was so sad!! update soon!

Nice Idea. We all knew link had a back story, we just don't know exactly what it contains. this seems about right for a Link "back story" good work :)