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Tabitha of MoonAurora
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
Wow that was pretty good. I have one thing to say though, I think that the Weasleys would have been much more affected by the bdeath of Fred )*: Still it was better than mine.
FireSpirit(I share an account w/ Tabitha)
tegsquared
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
i havn't been on a proper computer in about 2 months.
and, **, i have missed it.
i was ahving ** withdrawls, well i wasnt actually but i wanted to be dramatic.

and i think that you should post that fic you wrote for caitlin on her birthday.
or because my birthday is coming up in *counts* 10 DAYS LOLOLOL, you should write me a fic :D
if you can i would like to have a Drarry.
and if you dont know waht that is google it plz.

and i just wanted to say that i have hardly seen you at school recently, have you even been there?

and i really dont care if i cant spell and the workds are wrong, cause i am just so ** happy that i am actually at a computer writing this.

i should prolly write somehing about how i liked this fic.
but i dont think i will i jsut wanted to rant.
but thats why you love me Peafy :D

im going now ill talk to you later :D

and i only have 9073 characters left LOLOLOLOL.

bye ILY
IM GONE WITH THE WIND
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
Seems like something Harry would do - wallow in his emotions. pfft. as if he would do anything else.
it was very well put. i loved it. :)
Melora
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
For further writing, you may be interested in this site: /sapienti_university_of_magic It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student
Zeromaru Chaos Mode
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
...how is it that you step into MY domain...

and somehow crank out something better than what i can come up with?

Jeez kit...if i wasnt so blocked up!

Damn...now i've been schallenged...balls.
Who-wants-to-know?
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
Are author notes really necessary?

Sorry, that was my one complaint as I was reading this story.

Good one-shot. The emotions were all open and sore; simply because of the events right before.
Feels complete, and lets us readers examine what might have happened in the days after Hogwarts was attacked--the funeral, and how/why Harry and Ginny got back together again.

Enjoyed the focus from Harry's perspective--and the small section from the Weasley family.

Ah, even at the end, George still makes me laugh. Unintentionally, but well done and welcome all the same. "omitting certain truths" is how one I remember a movie putting it. (Rocky Road from the clay animation of chickens based on 'The Great Escape'--title escapes me, but pretty sure word chickens is in there somewhere)

Enjoyed the length--but more so, the quality. Absolutely wonderful
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