This is fantasic. I love the flow that you managed to create in each sentence. You truly have a talent for snetence structure.

Thank you so much for this; there really aren't many good SVU stories anymore, even with the other sites. This was brilliant, and I am so jealous of your sentence structure! I won't bother with picking sentences that stood out for me - there were a lot! :)

A really refreshing piece, I enjoyed it.

Very bittersweet and sad. I really enjoyed seeing it all from Elliot's POV.

Nice fic. I don't usually read L&O SVU but it was great.

I absolutely love this. It's very well written. There are so many poignant one liners about the characters, especially the Elliot and Olivia relationship. Usually, I don't like EO focuses, but this is done almost in a artistic way. Also, I love how Elliot tries to picture his coworkers at home on their couches. However, I think my favorite part is the mentioning of all the layered changes in the partnership. It definitely set everything up for your ending. Nice job :)

wow! amazingly written very good!

Love this. It broke my heart.

w.o.w.

That was insanely good.

Obviously I adored the Ice cream part but I also loves the part where they are up in the crib and the description of them there.

Beautiful