Good, the characterisation is solid, but I felt the end was a bit sudden, and so was Oliver being built. Mainly cause he's so skinny. A bit corny at the end. And Lilly is totally hot. :)

That was one of the best oneshots I have read in like three months!
I really loved it!
AH! Write more please!

I'm not a very big fan of Hannah montana series but your story...amazing

Awhh
That was amazing :)
xx

aww this was so cute! i loved it.

I. Love. It.
absolutely awesome, great writing! you should definately write more loliver!

i liked it, especially the part about oliver thinking he was being punk'd when he saw lilly. great story!

Loliver 4ever :)

Very cute! Good job! Had good timing, the story wasn't rushed at all.