Wow, what an ending…great story. :) The ending was really quite striking, and it was nice of Snake to…do that! He’s so sweet. I liked how Marth didn’t want Snake to get up, heh! But he knew that Snake was going to do what he was going to do.

Anyway, great Snake/Marth story, SSA; again, I love your Smash tales, but I do look forward to your future stories, in whatever section. I will keep reading (in fact, I’m just about to read your new Metal Gear story right now! :D). Great job. Happy writing!

-Razz

Yes, reunion! *dies from Snake/Marth-ness* Hooray...sorry, this will be short...but I love this couple...

...Okay, I'll try to be more useful. I love how upset Marth was having to take time away from Snake; shows he really cares about him. :) And, well...their reunion was just so sweet, they just talked to each other a little while.

...Yes. *hurries to last chapter*

Gah, this was a beautiful chapter, Miss Aurora! I wanted to cry at the Petal Dance scene. It touched me that so many people wanted to see Snake well.

I also loved the trio of Zelda, Rosalina, and Peach taking care of Snake. He truly deserves all three.

…Oh, and Marth. Yee! I almost cried (…again) when he was called to see Snake. Yes, Marth, do come back soon…

[like watching a one-legged puppy die]—Oh my, that’s…sad…:(!

Anyway, great job! Sorry I’m so late in reviewing, but I just got released from the prison of school. :D

What a weird ending. Did not expect for Ganondorf to apologize. To sweet. -_-

I'm glad you were finally able to finish a multi chapter Smash Brothers fic! -caramelldansen- Can't really give the rating since it was so short. -sweatdrop-

Li: You're just lazy.

Be quiet! It was cute but...something wasn't right about the fic...I can't put my finger on it. Oh well! I can't wait for more stories. :D

Momo M. Taro or Pepper from Fallen Angel

Defiantly wasn't the ending I was expecting!! However it is still very satisfying. :) It is a very admirable thing for snake to come to an understanding and forgive. Even though I wished for some revenge, I think this ending was very good and the overall story enjoyable. :)

An interesting take on how snake became old :) the comfort and love in the end was so fluffy! ( I did giggle at the characters trying listen behind the doors XD big whoop-de doo! )
I do wonder what is going through links head...Revenge sounds nice.

Scary and happy and yet... scary at the same time. Who's Link or Marth planning revenge on? Ganon? Snake? Liquid? What's- wait, I'mma stop right there. I'm ready for anything ya toss at me- I think. I loved this. Needed it badly. You made me SO happy with this tale, Aurora. I loved it intensely.

~Shiny-sama

I can't imagine how sorrowful and nerve wracking it is for the heroes now that they are waiting. Snake maybe in terrible pain but hes got many dear friends who would do all they can to help and protect him now. Evil will get just what it deserves too!


pretty cool name for the PT btw :) Its always interesting to see what people call him in their stories.
the accent bit at the end is ADORABLE. I always kinda pictured that as well. thanks to you I do love the snake marth pairing. :)

Are you making this a Snake/Marth story?! I’m so pleased you’ve tread back into this pairing a few times…you were the one that re-ignited my love for these two. Muchas gracias!

Anyway, brilliant. It’s clear all the Smash Brothers care deeply for Snake. And although I’m rooting for Marth, Link can’t be put down, either. :) And I’m so glad PT’s a main character—although that’s just *coughs* my personal preference, but you hardly see him around these parts…(and Sion Elsche’s an awesome name for him, by the way.)

I do hope you make this longer, but if you don’t, I still thought that it was great. :)

Your back in the Smash category?! JOY! I might come back too! -caramelldansen-

Li: Uh...yay?

Hmm...full project? Doubt it. You wouldn't finish it. The story shouldn't be too long if you want to make it sucessful. :D So...that's all I can say.

And thank you so much for creating the Lux Pain category again! People are finally there making Lux Pain fics! I'm so happy! -dies-

Li: -sweatdrop-...Continue to upload hopefully, and Pepper is glad you are okay.

Momo M. Taro or Pepper from Fallen Angel

With the way you're leaving this off, I'm hoping to god you're continuing this thing. Holy bejeezus, Aurora, you're going to make me imagine what else has happened, aren't you? DO NOT WANT. I want you to show me he's going to be okay, because the fact that Snake's in this condition is making me scared beyond belief and everything in between. *wails and gnaw nails* You gotta stop doing that to me sometimes, love. I won't have any nails left to bite at the rate you're keeping me in suspense!

~Shiny-sama

A Smash fic! I understand that you don’t like this section anymore, but I always love it when you return.

Yeah, go Pit, Pokemon Trainer, and Marth! They make a great team.

Poor Snake!…That whole section, I just wanted to punch Ganondorf and Ocelot. -_-;;

Ike, Zelda, and Link make a great team, too. I guess I would pull for Marth, but it’s sweet seeing two characters compete for Snake again. I loved how Marth’s section and Link’s section surround the part where Snake’s getting tortured by Ganon and Ocelot. Just gives a sense of hope…

…Until the last lines. Oh my gosh!

That was intense. Beautiful job, as usual.

Wow ganondorf and Liquid are really revolting in this. the wording you used and The last sentences of this story were really strong! Im pretty sure you meant for your readers to hate them and this sure made me feel that way!
Waah! it makes me so sad :( Poor snake I really felt bad for him. He needs some TLC fast!fast!

*sob* how can it be just a one shot xD I'd read more of it.

Poor Snake, the guy never seems to be able to catch a break. I'm heartbroken that once again, his twisted brother can't seem to mind his own business.

But whether he realizes it or not, Snake has people that love him and will traverse the ends of the earth. Love always manages to survive such averse conditons.

ta

Master of teh Boot

What? Aurora lives? Oh mai gosh.

Quite a tasty one-shot,
leaves alot to the imagination, don't it?
While reading this,
the "Tales of" series came to mind,
and I can't fathom as to why that is!!

*sigh* I should really read your other works. :/
the ones not pertaining to the Smash fandom
(which i've grown irritated with,
it makes me feel just awful about myself.)

bleh. listen to me babble on. i'm sorry. ^^;

happy writting!
-jippers.