 Akira Sasaki 6/29/10 . chapter 1Awww...
I may not have played these arcade games before...
but I did truly...
UNDERSTAND THE TOTAL RAGE WHEN MAI DIED AT THE BOSS SCENE.
THAT'S TERRIBLE. xD
... it's like, you're in an intense heated battle when suddenly! Boom. You're dead. Game Over. K.O. Please try again. /RAGE
So anyway, awww, that was really sweet.
3 Man. I hope Mai catches her. XD
Thanks! Akira |
 Major Mike Powell III 7/27/09 . chapter 1Well, well, soldier...
LOL
LMAO
ROFL
VideogamesF-Bombsshoujo-aiPure WIN!
This was S-W-EET!
Nice work, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
 TruePrime 6/22/09 . chapter 1I found it alittle hard picturing Nat and Mia in a situation like this, but I think that made it that much better trying to picture because of that fact. Anyway awesome little one shot I really enjoyed it plus more Mai and Nat goodness. After checking your profile it seems like you are one of the few writters that ships most of the couples I like even though there unpopular so I hope to see some more stories from the couples you have listed (I pray for more Mia and Nat since there so rare and maybe some MioXYui.) |
 VanillaSlash 5/24/09 . chapter 1Ah, too cute! o- They're like middle schoolers themselves! "Catch me if you can!" This was so cute, and I was completely sure that Mai would win! :P Love it! |
 Ume sama 5/8/09 . chapter 1Cute |
 Portmanteau 5/1/09 . chapter 1CONTINUE! please do im in love with MaixNatsuki haha
can't wait! |
 SilverRite 5/1/09 . chapter 1Hmm not bad. You dont find much Mainat around here so when I found out the pairing I was plsently surprised. Good job. |