Oh, wow! It's nearly the end now, isn't it? Shame:( Does the sene with the waterfall happen? That would have been good! You'r actuall writing has improved so much over the story! You'r amazing now, girl! You totally rock! This is better the Twilight! Lov yas

Eh, the chapter was good but the whole 'cut my wrist thing to save Richard' was a little too Twilight for me.

Oh...my...GOD! THIS STORY IS FREAKING AWESOME! Please please please update this soon. Which chapter is Slade gonna come in?

another wonderful chapter - lots of suspense! I'm glad she's a vampire too!

LJ

OMG! HOLY CRAP! THATS SO GOOD!

AH! This is so AWESOME! It's so kinda cool how you gave them a special spot, and I like how Raven is helping them. Oh and when is someone going to save Terra! She deserves to be saved! And lastly... SHE HAS FINALLY BECOME A VAMPIRE WOOT! Update soon! The suspense is KILLING me!

that was AWESOME!

pure incredibility... if thats even a word! lol!

sorry i couldnt read or review sooner ive been out camping in wisconsin for the past 2 weeks i just got back!

that was amazing! you feel as if your really there! you can feel their emotions! its amazing! well done!

i cant wait till your next update!

Dani!

WOW! omg! that was AWESOME! im so sorry that i counldnt review earlier... ive been out camping in wisconsin for the past 2 weeks! but im glad to be back near electricity and actual flushing toilets! lol! all porta poties over there! lol! well that was AWESOME! IM gunna go read the next chapter now! lol!

Dani!

omgsh so good! this story is amazing i love it. update son i needa know what happenss :) i love the kori and richard fluff i hope theres more to come :D

YAY they will run away together _ *gigglin'*

i love that part when Richard was angry because of that kiss and Kori was there.

And that speech he gave when he slipped his arms slowly around her *sigh dreamily* so romantic(so sad and i almost teared up but it's so beautiful.i donno why i was so effected ) i really REALLY loved that SO much!

hope u update soon *jumpin' up and down*

This is a awesome story! The plotline that you panned out so far is so intriguing, and it's just sucking me in! I really really want you to update soon, cause I'm dying to know what will happen next! Oh and are Jericho and Terra gonna get together?

hey, i'm back! Amazing! This is better than most books, its so totally awsome! And i wasn't angry that she kissed X, i liked it, it thickens the plot and makes everything more interesting. Does she actually hav any feeling for him? Ah, will they run away and be happy? Oh, this is so exciting! Keep up the incredible work!

oh...dat was so swet...:D

totally romantic...n SWWET!:D

U ROCKK!:)

UPDATE SON!PLS!I cant WAIT 4 de next chaptrr!:)

Wow that was great!

Its fine that she kissed X - life is complicated. Richard's reaction was great too...

I can't wait for Richard and Kori to run off together! That should be exciting!

Fantastic job as always, I love this story!

LJ

Aw, thanks, and it's no problem at all! Your story has come a long way and I'm really enjoying it.

Now onto the review:

UGH! I HATE BRUCE! It's so unfair, him treating Kori like she's something to be auctioned off. Dangit, why can't he just let her marry Richard! He's her son, they like each other. Dangit, why can't things be simple?

Okay, this may seem paranoid, but Xavier was so controlling her! He must have some mind power thingy that makes her succumb to him. There's no way she would have kissed him otherwise! He's mindcontrolling her I tell you!

Oh, I loved the reaction Richard had when he caught them kissing. He was so scary and angry, and him breaking everything in his room was a nice touch. Very nice.

I really hope Kori's plan to run away with him works. But I don't know... I not confident it'll work. I'm still gonna cross my fingers though! I know they'll eventually find a way to be together.

Awesome chapter _ update soon

ps- coolness! you brought in Val Yor and Red Star. nice!