This is awsome! more more more! (one can never have too much Ton Phanan-y goodness!
Please update soon!

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hey you *pokes* i just realized somethin... Lucas didnt actualy create the Wraith's so in all reality Ton and Face and all the other Wraith's belong to Aaron Allston who wrote the books about them! just wanted to let you know!

As always, i am the ever-dangerous, ever-psychotic, Scorch

as long as you own a toaster you dont have to be down about not owning star wars...you do own a toaster right? anyway nice fanfic...

as always, i am the ever-dangerous, ever-plotting, superior intelect, Scorch

wow, that was intersting. Loved the story so far.

Great story! Keep it up!

Recently rediscovered this story.
Any chance that it will be finished?

I recently found this series on a couple of sites, and it's become one of my favorites, except for the fact that I'm dying to know what happens. Will you ever get around to finishing it?

Keep up the good work.

Hey, an update! Yay! I've been following this one for quite a while and am really happy to see it updated- keep up the awesome job!

I like the story very much. It reminds me of a story writing challenge I wrote something for in .Wedge.

I think you've captured the characters wonderfully, though I'm somewhat surprised that Gavin would scurry away after being glared at. I'm sure he'd make a 'tactical retreat
Overall, a very good story, and I would love to see a little more added, perhaps exploring what happens when the Wraiths head back to the THX galaxy.

Nice story. Real nice.

But.I hate to say this; you messed around with things that shouldn't be messed around with. You changed things that were in the canon movies and books. You brought back Yoda; this is just not right and should have never been done. I know, I know, this probably what we could call an AU (alternate universe) fic. But still. And another thing, everyone in Star Wars wouldn't be able to talk to people on Earth without the use of translators. Basic and English are two very different languages. You also changed the characters around a bit. I know Wes and Hobbie are the jokesters of Rogue Squadron, but Hobbie just isn’t this way, most of the time at least.

And not once did I see any of the female or non-human squadron members mentioned. I never saw Tyria Sarkin or Shalla Nelprin in this story.

But, still a nice story all around. Good plot, but I can't agree with a few things.

And personally, it sucks that that one girl is going to have to say goodbye to the pilots. And this girl the story revolves around kind of reminds me of Shinji Ikari from Neon Genesis Evangelion, you know, kind of depressed, withdrawn, and lonely.

Sorry for being the flamer here, but a few things were changed, and I couldn't agree with them.

Thank you Thank you Thank you THANK YOU!

I've always loved the Wraithws and you're doing great with these two! (Maybe George will lend them to you for your birthday, eh?
Anticipaiting more great chapters!

Cheers!

YAY! You updated! And you updated with a GREAT chappie! I love this story, hope you know that! It deserves SOOOOO many more reviews than it gots. You should really change the rating to PG-13 though. Thas what it is and with the new search engine, more people will read it under PG-13! Just a lil advice!

I LOVE this fic! When's the next time ur gunna update? Must have more... WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO?

*glances around to make sure the other Imperial Chicks aren't watching* I love this story! Everything about it just makes me happy... I certainly hope you're going to continue it. It'd be a shame for such a good story to be abandoned.

I love this fic! There's not a whole lot of Face/Phannan fics out there (that I know of at least and this is a great one