Awwww this is really good! You should certainly develop it, I'd love to see what happens if Jay finds out!

amazing! please write more.

This is really good! It's a shame there aren't many more Inbetweeners fics.

Please write so more Inbetweeners. This site truley needs it. You have done fantastic on this, really caught the emotions :)

Oh wow, I loved this. You really potryed emotions quite well in this and that's what gave it its edge! Awesome!

Oh wow that's really good! I love the Inbetweeners and you should totally write more fics for it, it's really good :D Thankyou! xx

I agree with you that Simon doesn't have any interest in Jay, but it's an interesting thought and you wrote it quite well. You should write more Inbetweeners stuff (god knows the site needs it) because you are really good at getting in their heads. Plus, I want more Jay :D Great fic!

Aw that was cute :) I liked it a lot. Keep it up