Good story but there was many many mistakes. You forget words is sentences and then the whole line doesnt make sense. The spelling sucks and the story was confusing. You kinda rushed it and didn t showed us the 'falling in love' part. You should edit your terrible work.

T o r a

Good story but there was many many mistakes. You forget words is sentences and then the whole line doesnt make sense. The spelling sucks and the story was confusing. You kinda rushed it and didn t showed us the 'falling in love' part. You should edit your terrible work.

T o r a

SO CUTE!

hmm,.,. that was sort of confusing,.,. hehehe

the story is great,.,. wonderful actually! :)

but you need proper spacing and you should separate parts because of the timeline! ;)

hehehe

i've spotted a few typos but that's okay! ;D

keep writing and inspiring,.,. :D

that was great! :)

hehehe

nice narration,.,. ;)

Takashi is so dense! :D

hahaha

how sweet! I liked the stories Yamazaki told. :D

sweetness

hahaha, the ending is funny! i luv the chiyam pairing!

I always thought Yamazaki and Chiharu were cute... . (I have this thing for Chiharu beating him up whenever he tells lies, mweheh.) . I was laughing all the way here! Ang galeng mo ate, sobra...

This caught my eye since I am a big ChiharuYamazaki fan! It's sweet and cutely written that i was in kilig mode all morning! It cracked me up a lot because of Yamazaki's weird humor. Chiharu is sensitive and sweet and a girl madly in love. if only yamazaki could see that!

i'm bawling my eyes out right now.. this is truely a WOW no words can express how unbelievably sweet this story is.. i mean everytime i read ur fanfics.. guess what? i always cry.. i dunno y.. but anywyaz please write more!

What does Satur mean? Hmm...
Chihaur and Yamazaki! I love that pairing too! CCS is the only manga in which I actually fell in love with a couple of pairings...but I just adore the characters! Yamazaki's story are so funny!;;
Crystle
(gee, how many of your stories have I reviewed in the last night? I'm just going throught your entire list o.o;)

ay, ang cute! D mwehehehe... remember me? (of course not! *sad puppy dog face*) ako po si hellmaster, Mysfaer/CAL's annoying little sister.

Gah! I hate YamazakixChiharu fics! Yamazaki is mine! Your story would be good if it was about someone else and CHIHARU, but I do say, Yamazaki and Chiharu make a horrible couple. She is too abusive.

P.S. Yamazaki is made of rubber

sooooo sweet...kawaii...i just love the scene in CCS where they're walking together holdin' hands in the crowd, it's just so CUTE! and then...yeah i'm a bit off track...but they're just sooooo cute! chiharu and yamazaki...yamazaki and chiharu...so sweet!

CUTE! KEEP UP THE WORK!

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