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QuixoticQuest
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
Ha, ha! That was freaking adorable!! Especially that last bit "and repeat the whole process."

I love the comparison of a baby being born to an hourglass, it's very fitting. You do a good job of making Otani and Risa both loving and their usual teasing selves throughout all that. You should write a one-shot or something about their life with the kids when they're older.

Awesome work! ^_^

-Don "QuixoticQuest"
Shadow Kitsune67
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Aww. . .cute. x3 I wish they'd make a sequel to the anime version of Love*Com. . .I love this couple so much!
Yamato's Tiger Lily
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
GUH! That was too cute. D: ♥ Do want more.
EmoEccentrica
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
cute! :3
danielie
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
So cute. :D I love how he worries that the baby will be taller than he is. :)
-danielie
Adelaide MacGregor
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
Too cute! Wonderful job, good luck
HBP12
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Aw! Now isn't that just sweet! :)
nakanaka
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
Aw I loved this! This was a complete surprise given the prompt, and I loved every line. They're so cute together, you got it spot on. Nice work, as always!
sweetsarcastic
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Adorable! Especially loved the lines
" Plus, this kid had a set of pipes on her; she was going to be loud, scream her head off, and most likely fall in love with a little boy and terrorize him to the breaking point,"

"... one year later, repeat the whole process"

Thanx for the story!
SapphireShell91
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Aw!
So Cute!
Please do a sequel to this, for this was great!
preety_lady
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
I loved it but lol Otani can live Risa pregnant amazingly quickly. Loved the fic to pieces.
Dark Hope Assassin
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
This was just infinitely sweet, I adored it very much! I like what you did with these characters - wonderful work. And the notion of them becoming parents is too amusing a thought to pass up indeed. Very well played and very well written out. :3 Adored it for its awesomeness.
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