 QuixoticQuest 2009-11-12 . chapter 1Ha, ha! That was freaking adorable!! Especially that last bit "and repeat the whole process."
I love the comparison of a baby being born to an hourglass, it's very fitting. You do a good job of making Otani and Risa both loving and their usual teasing selves throughout all that. You should write a one-shot or something about their life with the kids when they're older.
Awesome work! ^_^
-Don "QuixoticQuest" |
 Shadow Kitsune67 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Aww. . .cute. x3 I wish they'd make a sequel to the anime version of Love*Com. . .I love this couple so much! |
 Yamato's Tiger Lily 2009-07-24 . chapter 1GUH! That was too cute. D: ♥ Do want more. |
 EmoEccentrica 2009-07-03 . chapter 1cute! :3 |
 danielie 2009-06-13 . chapter 1So cute. :D I love how he worries that the baby will be taller than he is. :)
-danielie |
 Adelaide MacGregor 2009-06-10 . chapter 1Too cute! Wonderful job, good luck |
 HBP12 2009-05-10 . chapter 1Aw! Now isn't that just sweet! :) |
 nakanaka 2009-05-04 . chapter 1Aw I loved this! This was a complete surprise given the prompt, and I loved every line. They're so cute together, you got it spot on. Nice work, as always! |
 sweetsarcastic 2009-05-03 . chapter 1Adorable! Especially loved the lines
" Plus, this kid had a set of pipes on her; she was going to be loud, scream her head off, and most likely fall in love with a little boy and terrorize him to the breaking point,"
"... one year later, repeat the whole process"
Thanx for the story! |
 SapphireShell91 2009-05-03 . chapter 1Aw!
So Cute!
Please do a sequel to this, for this was great! |
 preety_lady 2009-05-02 . chapter 1 I loved it but lol Otani can live Risa pregnant amazingly quickly. Loved the fic to pieces. |
 Dark Hope Assassin 2009-05-02 . chapter 1This was just infinitely sweet, I adored it very much! I like what you did with these characters - wonderful work. And the notion of them becoming parents is too amusing a thought to pass up indeed. Very well played and very well written out. :3 Adored it for its awesomeness. |