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Reviews for: Cupid 10 to 20 The Transfer
DunnyWater
2009-11-18 . chapter 1
The conversation between Cupid's mum, dad and uncle is priceless!!

"It actually makes me feel kind of proud right here! My son gets to spend 90 days in a mental hospital, and not just once but twice! He always wanted to be Captain Kirk, go where no god has gone before. But how could he? We’ve been everywhere already! But he found a way! He actually is going where no god has gone before!”

He really is a 'pioneer' isn't he? :D

Nice transition between the Cupid's. Its a fairly logical explanation (gah, i'm not Spock!) for why there were two. I do wish however that both of them had a chance to finish, or conclude.

Thanks!
Smilelysoul13
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
You should continue this...it's awesome!
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