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Isabella and me
2009-09-03 . chapter 7
i already read your other laviyuu stories and let me tell you yer both awsome authors :D
glon morski
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
"That’s it for this chapter! (sob) It’s so short... Sorry!"
Short, but touchy XD
Souls of Fire
2009-08-16 . chapter 7
Yay! Updates make me happy. 8D Thanks for this one! It was good! *nods*
*waits patiently for next update*
Koru Da Fern Princess
2009-08-16 . chapter 7
yay! me likey! XD
Kiro Uchiha
2009-08-16 . chapter 7
Wot!! Cute.. It was just so cute when Lavi embraced Yuu but you're right this chapter seems pretty short. I'm looking forward to the next one ^^
RebelFlame
2009-08-15 . chapter 7
Didn't catch anything...anyways Lavi is an idiot. But now I'm curious about Daddy's sins and stuff. So update soon so rabid reviwers can find out please!
-RF
P.S. short response for a short chapter lol
Souls of Fire
2009-07-23 . chapter 6
Update please!

I loved Shimmering Scales and I really like this one too! Keep working!
Devatron2000
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
I hope you can get more done very soon it's good
Yuu13
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
thank you so much for this chapter! i'll be waiting for the next one too!
RebelFlame
2009-07-06 . chapter 6
And Lavi hasn't turned into a stalker yet?! Oh well, good chapter cuddly kawaiiness, even if Yuu is a bit stiff. X3 Update soonish!
-RF
P.S. No i didn't find anything wrong
P.S.S. your majesty LOL!
Katina Uchiha
2009-07-06 . chapter 6
great as ever, dear!
ShimmerAppleShine
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
Another awesome chapter guys!

Everytime I finish reading one of your chapters I always have a smile on my face (which helps if I have work that day ^^)

Your stories are always fresh and unique, plus Yuvi is epic!
RebelFlame
2009-06-21 . chapter 5
I didn't catch anything but there are two writers so yeah...I like this chapter especially the demonic eye XD I'm a bit crazy about the supernatural *continues reading Salem's Lot* Update soonish!
-RF
Katina Uchiha
2009-06-20 . chapter 5
girl, this is AMAZING! you are SO freaking talented! i love it!
glon morski
2009-06-20 . chapter 5
This is supposed to be a romance/drama story? If you ask me, it would be better off as a romance/humor story. Seriously, I can't help but fall out of the chair every five minutes or so. And Kanda's OOC-ness doesn't disturb me anymore either. Great chpter. Please, update ASAP! *puppy dog eyes attack*
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