...You know, for a Go pro, Akira can be surprisingly colorblind... On the other hand, black&white don't need color vision, so he might actually /be/ colorblind...

DAMMIT! 'SHOT BUNNY! 'SHOT BUNNY! Got too many freaking plot/'shot bunnies...

this is adorable,
usually Hikaru is the one dipicted as the clumsy slob, its interesting to see Akira stepping in the role.
Akira is quite neat in the cannon.

aw cute story love it. (:

I didn't think ramen had a sell-by date. (Resolves to check cupboards)

In some ways OOC (I figured Touya for a neatnic... maybe that's his mother), but why not? Nice little ficlet.