Oh, i like. :D

Well done.

Very well written. A beautiful and original storyline, well done!

hm possibly the weirdest pairing and yet somehow this works.

oh,this is awsome and really nicely written.I Loved it !
keep up the awsome work!

*giggles exhilaratedly* I've come this way from TokiMirage's story 'Lemon Drops and Blood Pops', and I can honestly say that I've never been happier to have followed an author's recommendation. Great story!

Kinda cute. I liked it. :)

I think I love you for this story. :)
It's absolutely wonderful!

What a great storyline! XD I guess it would have been a little too daring to continue closer to Harry's schooldays, so perhaps this is the best stopping point. ^o- I don't know, I just like this pairing for some reason! The danger, the forbidden love! O.o! But, I suppose I don't have to explain it. You Get It! *Cue dramatic sigh* Fabulous fic: just great!

Amazing. Albus/Harry slash fics can be incredibly disturbing, but you did it really well...fantastic! Write another one! ;]

Wow, I'd love to see this continued. So many places you could go with it. ;)
Lovely story.

No matter how many time I read this, I still love it. You did an amazing job. I applaud you!

Awesomeness such as this is never shameless. And I agree--I'm reading Toki Mirage's stuff right now and it rocks.
(looks furtively around) Tell no one I was here! I'm supposed to be typing Albus/Harry father/son moments far away!
(slips into shadows)

I never, ever, in a million years, thought I could ever like this pairing, or even read it without getting nauseous. You have just proved me wrong. Congrats on a well done and fascinating oneshot. I'm going to go read Ephemeral Time now! ^^ Thanks. New pairings are always fun.

This was wonderful to read! Love the ending.

Aww. I loved this, Albus's emotions were really well described.