 Bob the Flying Monkey 2009-08-10 . chapter 1this was a really good story. such a marvelous idea. excellent work.
~BtFM |
 excessivelyperky 2009-06-04 . chapter 1And wouldn't it have been nice if someone had bothered to retrieve his body from the Shrieking Shack--then there would have been no doubt.
But clearly, that was beyond anyone's capabilities.
Still a very good story. It's nice that Hermione learned to like him a great deal and saw him in her dreams.
After all, dreams were all Snape ever had. |
 slytherinlion.o9 2009-05-27 . chapter 1wow... :( it's amazing. |
 whitehound 2009-05-07 . chapter 1Much sadder than most of your stories, but very well done and affecting. My favourite line is "And when we sleep we also dream". |
 ippogrifo 2009-05-03 . chapter 1Great tale about how to say farewell.
In DH one feels that Severus is condemned to indifference and loneliness even after his death: nobody to cry for him among the living and, beyond the veil, nobody to wait for him to thank him and to finally forgiving each other.
Your story makes justice for all those who in life never received gratitude and love, no matter how much they sacrifice themselves.
Although Snape’s portrait is the proof that he is really dead and the end of our hopes, to me the final is like a happy ending. Hermione has learnt to live alone (and at least for her, it’s been a choice), serene and confident that she will find again what she lost.
Thanks for your melting words. |
 notwritten 2009-05-02 . chapter 1Thank you for sharing. Interesting. Keep smiling. :-) |
 Valmarien 2009-05-02 . chapter 1That was very moving, and written with great sensitivity. Thank you for writing it. |
 duj 2009-05-02 . chapter 1Her heart called him back, and stayed faithful forever. A fitting match for a man whose faithfulness was also eternal. |