 Hazmatt 2009-10-06 . chapter 1Moving! I enjoyed it! Deep! |
 Mriana 2009-05-10 . chapter 1I don't know about it being J/C or not, but it was a nice drabble. Thanks for sharing. :) |
 cj1013 2009-05-04 . chapter 1I just finished reading the Full Circle, the latest Voyager book, so this little drabble just about brought me to tears. You summed up everything that is so good about the J/C relationship. |
 walkinshade 2009-05-03 . chapter 1And in answer to your words I say.
Understanding is something special between people,
Wheter they know each other for years or they just meet.
Sometimes you don’t need words.
Sometimes words are too much.
And a look in the eye can say everything.
She did that to me.
And I to her….
I’ve painted legends.
Beyond words.
We understood.
More than basic values.
Eventually all that counted was beyond measure.
A look, a smile, a thought.
How can I not think of her?
Every day?
That’s what love is all about.
My dear friend,
Keep thinking of you and your family. Hope things will turn to the brighter side again. Think it is enough to say, that I know, that this road is never easy. But Thank you for writing, even when it's just a drabble
Gine |
 MarMar1 2009-05-03 . chapter 1Well done! As one reviewer said, you pack a lot into a few words. I say this could be the words/thoughts of either. I also say it could be either that one has died (after a long, fulfilling life together, of course) or one is not there (which makes me think KJ alone and Chak of with, well, not going there... I vote for one dead after a long life together. My only disappointment with this was, being excitedly expectant upon seeing a notice of a new story by you, it was so short. Hope to see a nice long story from you soon! |
 DianeB 2009-05-03 . chapter 1You pack a lot of feelings into very few words. Nicely done. I say it's Chak. There's a "soft edge" to it that feels (to me) very Native American, particularly the final line. I always believed Chakotay was more in love with Janeway than she was with him. |
 eternity-99 2009-05-02 . chapter 1Nice. I get the sense that it is Chakotay's thoughts. Nice story. |
 starrylaa 2009-05-02 . chapter 1That was beautiful. It could be either. I'm going for Chakotay ^^. I particularly liked the last line. |
 LynnEGib 2009-05-02 . chapter 1Does this mean one of them is dead? So sad |
 Ayjah 2009-05-02 . chapter 1It could be either one... well done |