i just gotta go aw, too.)

please write more, if your just gonna follow t he movies that would be great

nice

I loved, I loved it, I loved it!

Loved it! Loved it!

I love this! Do the whole movie and more this way!

very cool ch great job i could really see logan thinking that

shighs awwwwwwww so so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet

That was so good! I loved it. A lot of bad words, but that's ok. Keep writing!)

oh that was so sweet! very logan-ish. smile he is too cute isnt he?

Good story, I assume that this is right before he takes her into his car right? You didn't make too many mistakes, the english was a little terse and a bit too wordy, but that's ok. Also, you mixed up a couple of phrases here and there. (I hope that you didn't find this insulting. I'd want to know what I'd done wrong if I'd writen in a different language. *Sigh* I'll never do that...me the perfectionist. Ah well.)

aww...poor Logan, he is a great hero, he just doesnt know it. _ good ficcy

*caps* I like it! It's very sweet and captures the mood perfetly.

how cute

LoL! That is so funny! I love it! I'm still laughing!