I get what you are trying to say, but you haven't quite said it yet. I think maybe this writing was too ambitious for your level. Still, it was...
interesting?

Awww that was soo cute! And actually kina sad sience its kinda one sided. I found this through the "Brains and Brawns" page thingy on livejournal so I do know there is a sequal! In fact I'm gonna go read it now! Great job! And please keep up the awsome work! XD

I cant tell if he like him or not. Will you please get back to me and tell me?.

this was awesome. My favourite pairing, and I liked that you sort of switched their usual roles around. I wish this was more than a one-shot... Anyway, great job!

I had just finished watching Sky High, and had the sudden craving for this pairing, and I have to say this oneshot-drabble is very nicely done. Could almost be canon Needless to say, I loved it.

perfect

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I really liked this quick read!

Very nice. I like how you used people's misconceptions against them, but the wording...

I'm sorry, but I'm not quite sure what you were trying to say. Warren is really in love with Will while everyone thinks its the other way around; that I'm fairly certain of. But Will is not aware? The last line makes me think that Will doesn't get it. I dunno.

Great shortie, though!

Angel

I kind of really wish you had continued it, but eh. I like it enough.

Did I call it or what? Warren, Will... Get it together please.

0.0 it ended? WHAT? T_T more please! please!

I hope that this isnt all we hear of this story. I would love to know what happens... Thanks for the great read-Shire

Well, I have to say that I was just sort of dabbling into the Sky High Fandom on a whim when I came across this fic, and really didn't expect to read anything all that amazing, but this fic was really really engaging and well written, and I loved it!

I loved that Warren is pinning and especially loved the voice you used for this, and as this was my first Sky High fic, I am very much looking forward to reading more, especially if you do decide to continue with this (I hope you do!
Please keep writting! :P

...Wow I really don't know what to say besides.

Will you write more?

Dalton

Cool! This was a great one-shot! I like how you left the ending open like that. It leaves me hopeful for a sequel! I can't wait to see what you come up with.