Awesome story. It's bittersweet and almost heartbreaking. I really adore Bela and this story just makes me feel so sorry for her; I could almost cry.

Great story. Keep up the good work!

This was heartbreaking.

Bela and Dean are two of my favorite characters on the show and what happened to them was awful. Their situations become even more tragic when their reasons for making selling their souls are very understandable (Bela just wanted to get away from her abusive father and Dean wanted to bring his brother back to life).

I'm still sad that the creator said that Bela is not coming back; I felt there could be a possibility as she seems to be the type to find some way to climb out of Hell.

Anyway, great one-shot.

It was great! It looks like you changed some of the lyrics. Where it should have been 'All her friends know why she can't sleep at night. All her family's asking if she's alright' you had 'No one knows why she can't sleep at night, and no one cares and asks if she's alright.' Did you change it for the story? Anyway, it was an excellent piece of writing.

Ouch, that was depressing... but good ;-) Nice job, keep it up!

Wow! This one was really, really good! The first one? I wouldn't say :)

Well, more to say - I absolutely love this song, and I love Linkin Park in general, so it was a double pleasure to read. You did so well with the descripstions. I could practically see myself inside of your story while reading.

Hope you'll write something else. There are not so many authors writing about Dean/Bela.

Wow, wonderful & intense. Love it!

This was a really intense, sad and heart wrenching story. So bittersweet how she realizes that she never got and will never get a second chance. It was wonderfully written and you should definitely write more.

- - "People used to say she had no feelings, no conscience, no heart. Oh, she just wished that was true – all she wanted was not to feel at all…" - -

I loved that line because it really defines what made Bela, Bela.

I think you should credit Linkin Park somewhere for those lyrics (great choice btw, very fitting).

It's not that good, but, it's just the first.

Youre kidding? Its just amazing :)

GO ON!