"Josh is probably, maybe, possibly just a little totally gay."

i had started giggling before this but once i got to this, i cracked up laughing...which is kinda bad since it's 3:20am as i'm writing this...but anywayz, other than the last line in this story, that one had to be the best XD

Haau. Lovely! Josh, you're a jerk. -pets them both-

Absolutely adore how this flows. It just... fits. So well.

Love it, even though it's very mix-matched and unorganized, that in itself really suits the thought patterns you're portraying.
Also, ending it how you did with the contrast of the image of Neku with a gun in his shaking hands against the image of Neku returning Josh's kisses with his own fierce ones, and then ending on that sweet note after such absolute stark contrast.
Basically, lovely. <3

This was just so sweet and different and sweet! I loved the last line. Ack I just loved this.

-Joh

I really, really liked this. The writing was witty, hilarious, and touching--sometimes all at the same time, even!

The relationship Joshua and Neku share is one admittedly difficult to understand, and I'm quite happy with this unique way of looking into it. Fun facts are a blast, no?

I especially liked how it wasn't only Neku's thoughts on Josh, but also Joshua's towards the end; that gave it a nice sense of conclusion. Those last paragraphs at the end of each boy's section in particular--the memories that immediately pop into their heads. That was really sweet. My personal favorites happened to be "Neku talking about CAT, eyes shining, cheeks flushed, deliriously happy ; Neku, eyes shining and cheeks flushed and delirious for another reason entirely" (THAT made me giggle) and, of course, that last line.

Lovely work, really! A definite favorite <3

~Jessie

Really nice. ^^ You kept the two of them really in character, I liked how you developed them so well. Very interesting too, although now I think of all the facts as canon. XD

Still, they'd all make sense~ All in all, nice oneshot! :D

Two words: Total. Pwnage. I'm serious, you have made quite the awesome little story here! It seems like you really put some thought into this...which is a VERY good thing. You also put your own made-up things in there-a good touch, my friend.
Incidentally, the writing blew me away. I hope to see more awesomeness from you in the future. xD

My Best Regards,
*~Charlotte~*

Oh. My. God. This was totally awesome xD I laughed, I freaked, I EVERYTHING XD This was a good one-shot.

This short was really great. I felt both sad and joyous while recalling moments from the game. Just today, in fact, I beat if for the second time, and I was still depressed by the ending credits. Also, I think you depicted the aspects of their relationship really well.
Uhh... even the fake parts. Though, the fake parts aren't bad or anything!
Actually, JoshuaxNeku is one of my OTP's, and especially so as of late.
But, I digress.
As I was saying, this was really great. It flowed well and I was taken in by the complex and deep writing.
Keep up the good work!
&&Happy writing~!

Later!