-my God: this was beautiful.

This is beautiful, You can feel the emotion in it especially at the end, the sheer fact of knowing your village gave you away to your murders on a silver plater, it hysterical in a sense.

This was the best one-shot of Utakata yet. I felt horrible when he died. This was wonderful.

so sad! Great job though!

This is a really great one-shot! :3

Did you know that the anime producers are going to make a filler about Utakata? o.O

-Setsuna

a great story. not too many about the off-screen jinchuurikis but this one is certainly good.*nods*

perfect papercut-how about an Utakata X Konan fic?like maybe before they took out rokubi, they fell in love?

This is really sad and really good. Wow, I love it! Utakata was probably my favorite of the Jinchuriki that didn't get placed in the story. But, serioiusly, this is amazing! ]

Wow, this was amazing I have to say. That and I agree with you completely. Utakata is the COOLEST of the Jinchuuriki (Right before Gaara of course) and I am super happy that you wrote this story.

I've been trying to find stuff about Utakata that Masashi Kishimoto may have told people. (Narutopedia has some info on his personality, but I kind of find and site ending in pedia to be unreliable).

The only thing I have EVER found other than what Bijuu he had was that his personality was supposedly 'charming'. But everyone finds different stuff 'charming'. (I personally think he would be a Ren kind of charming. (Ren is from the anime Hell Girl/Jigoku Shoujo) but maybe that's just the similar hairstyles talking. Who knows.)

I am planning on a few stories that will involve Utakata and I was wondering on who you think would be good paired with him. (I'm not anti-yaoi, I just can't write it to save my life. So a girl would be nice.) I was actually thinking about Sakura since she knows Naruto and Gaara, she more sympathetic to Jinchuuriki.

Anyways, sorry for the long review, just had to state what I thought.

-Perfect Papercut

I was charmed by Utakata at first sight as well. Thank you for writing about him. I loved it and hope you keep it up!

Mm.

Good to see someone else from Singapore writing.

I like it. It's painfully poignant and rather vague, which reflects everything most people know about the other bijuu. This should really get a little more recognition.

The bracketed extra comments are delightful. However, you may want to either proofread before you post or check your story while you're writing - there are at least three, four typos even now, and in a quality work this short they stand out like flashing lights.

But keep up the writing. Heh, based on this I expect much good fic to come, eh?

This is so sad. TT

The Rokubi Jinchuuriki is sexy and I'm really glad you decided to write about him.

I like the fact that he actually was treated fairly well by his village.

Just one thing though. The Akatsuki wear cloaks, not clocks despite the amusing mental image.