WOW that was really good! ever think of extending it? i would read it!

You have to continue with this story. I want to know what is going to happen.
What does the squints think of Stryver?
Update soon

I want more... OMG! I cant wait to read more...

JENNIFER

Oh my god.


I wanna kill that guy! PLEASE LET ME KILL HIM!

Ok, first off. Scott Stryver=Mr. Stryver. Now give me my brownie points! :P

Second, this is my favorite fic of the ones you've written. You know that if I don't like it, I'll say so, but I adore this one. The song isn't my favorite in the world, but you captured the emotions so perfectly, without gratuitous angst! :D

I'm no Shakespeare, but your writing has improved significantly. Good job :)

Btw, you get brownie points for knowing that the Army camo is called ACU ;)

Bravo. I am thoroughly impressed. (With the whole story, not just the camo lol)

interesting start

Aww poor Booth!
You should definitely add more. What made her change like that? What did Booth do in his service?
Also, I'm not sure if it was supposed to be funny, but I loved that you included "musical interlude" as a lyric chunk...I giggled.

this was really good and sad, I definitely think you should add to it! Vienna Teng is one of my favorite artists and Recessional is my favorite song of hers, Between comes in a close second, anyway I thought it was great, I loved it! :)

wow one of the best i've ever read. the end was perfect.

You said it would be "B/B, of course!"
You lied.

Aww! Amazingly written, i so hope this doesn't happen on the show! lol. Love it as a fan fic tho tehe xx

Aw. That was lovely. Sad, but lovely. I sometimes do get sick of teeth rotting fluff, so that was a tear-jerking refreshment.

:) Loved it.

Emmax