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RoyalTwinFang
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
it thing u pick the wrong him armor for him. the armor loke weild. in my opion would have pick kamen rider Odin/Wrath's armer. it like cooler and he was one of the most powerful. look him up with surive mode.
Randomreader 001
2009-10-07 . chapter 5
good, it was a good chapter, I like how your keeping the to series balanced in one story, and not over doing one for the other. hope the next chapter is a good one. :)
Randomreader 001
2009-10-06 . chapter 4
I find you story really good. but in a way it is kinda "wordy". I mean it's nice that your putting detail into your story but it doesn't need to take up a lot of your story scenes just to inform the readers.
Tech-nin
2009-10-05 . chapter 5
this is a really cool story and I can't wait to read more of it. you're a talented writer and you're doing a better job than others in integrating the ideas. please try to update soon
Jasmine-angela
2009-09-28 . chapter 5
WANT MORE!PLZ
narutokazama
2009-09-07 . chapter 2
Man you are really good at describing faiz usual routine.You must really know your Kamen Rider!You even got Faiz flick right ^^
deathgiant85
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Interesting story, but will you include Psyga and Orga in this? And will you also have Side Basha and Jetslinger as well? Also update soon please, I want to see where this goes.
jay
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
great fisrt start
narutokazama
2009-06-12 . chapter 5
Man! this chapter was long you must have worked really ** it.Your really good at describing
narutokazama
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
Hey why did you make Faiz a girl and who's team are you going to put Naruto on.
narutokazama
2009-06-12 . chapter 3
This story is awsome right more.And also if Zabuza and Haku were in a crate wouldn't the strength of the Orphnoch foot crush the crate and them in one blow?
narutokazama
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
You did a really great job! I love watching all the kamen rider series.
Ant Crown
2009-06-01 . chapter 3
Ok...

Actually I have no idea how the physics work behind the kick and also I don't praticularly care.

Besides: Naked Eye speed is only in Accel Form.

The entire symbol of Phi after the orphenoch is destroyed I figure means a successful maneuver completion considering their 'successes' with Kiba, and Rose and Croc Orphenochs which were all failures.
Dragon Man 180
2009-05-22 . chapter 5
Okay, as cool as the Rider stuff is... if Naruto is facing a ninja like Orochimaru he'd be better off using ninjutsu and Taijutsu because no ninja is going to let him stand there and press the buttons to power up his attacks and ninja are way faster than Orphnochs. So he should learn to combine Kamen Rider moves with his ninja stuff, other wise he's dead meat during the exams.

I can't wait to see what clan the woman and baby are from in Konoha. But I can totally see her extending an open invitation to Naruto for dinner.
Anonywulf
2009-05-20 . chapter 5
It's an interesting story overall, and had me look into Kamen Rider 5. This brings up the question of how Naruto uses the Faiz Gear, is he going to be an Orphenoch like Takumi, or have implanted Orphenoch DNA? If he's an Orphenoch, will he be a Fox Orphenoch in a similar manner to Takumi's Wolf Orphenoch form, or will he be the Wolf Orphenoch of the Narutoverse, since you had Sting-Fish and Ox working together? Of course, I don't expect any sort of answer, but I find it mildly cathartic to express questions brought up by stories.

Also, if you've included the details in using the Gears, will there eventually be a Delta and Kaixa joining the fight, or will this be a one Rider show? If there are multiple Riders, please don't have Sasuke be one, unless he ends up one of the shmucks to use Delta and croak.
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