Wow I am intrigued by this story how come its not finished yet?

Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter. ;-)

If Gibbs doesn't "take care of Sam", I will. Now, if someone would point me in the direction of where this dirtbag lives, I'll be on my way. How dare he!! Lovin' it!

No! Don't hurt my Tony!! Get'em Gibbs! Bad Sam! Go Jack! On to the next chapter! ;-)

i love the storyline, very well developed. I've read a few stories w/ a similar plotline by mokite, but i'm not going to lie, i think you're doing a much better job developing the emotional changes. can't wait for the next chpt. though i noticed that you called his apartment a flat, and thought i was a european thing, but then you called yours an apt. so yeah...but tony would most likely call it an apartment. just for future reference :) and in case you were wondering, yes, i am one of those crazy teenaged american fangirls who is in love with gay boys. :P looking forward to the update!
sincerely,
the Evil Jenyus

Great chapter, looking forward to more.

yay, an update!

i loved this chapter, its killing me to see tony like this, but deep down i love it!

Lots of luck with the new apartment. I've only lived in humid place so it must be a shock to you.
I'm so glad you did all these updates. I thought you gave up on the stories. This was very good like always. How Tony reacted to his stuff but it's Sam's things now and I can understand Tony wanting to start over again, with things he didn't have to share with Sam. And how he went into a flash back which it common with some that went through what Tony did. It's hard to stop loving the person even if they abused you Pysically or mentally or just plain both. Normal reaction too with still loving the person who abuses you and then to believe what has been said to you over and over to make you stay and listen to that person, taking your self esteem down until you hardly have any. Thinking you have no other choice and you're no good and that no one would ever want you but that person...very real...can't wait to see what else Tony goes through since it does take time even if you know you did the right things, you tend to start remembering what is used to be like and push the other things away. And then the doubt , if I only did this or that type deal. Only you've thought about that in the relationship and tried it..lol...Yeah I know what I'm talking about a probably a few people do that are reading this. Again , very good job. and hope you update all your stories again , soon...And again enjoy your new place. Sue

Cool chapter ,thank you for updating.

I'm actually enjoying this one pretty much. Your English is better than some native English speakers! A few verb tense problems but nothing too major.

What is beginning to worry me is the violent content of your work. I'm pervy enough to enjoy reading this kind of thing on occasion, mostly because I like angst. But it makes me wonder if you have experienced this kind of thing, makes me wonder if you are safe, because it crops up so frequently in your work. I do hope this is just the genre you prefer to write in, that neither you nor anyone close to you has been through this kind of thing.

And I totally sympathise with you over your writer's block. We'll hang out and wait, don't worry!

This is a great start to the story, lots of angst for Tony but I am glad Gibbs is there for him. Your English is a lot better than some of the authors I have read, have you asked if anyone can check over the story for you before you post to pick up on the small errors in your English. I hope you can update soon.

NOt bad, looking forward to reading more.

good story more soon please??

I thought this was a great chapter. Filled in some spots about Sam and Tony. And then Gibbs knowing he'd protect Tony even if it were forever. Great job, Sue

Missed your stories, hey! and what do I find another story. You're doing well please update when you can