Oh god, I almost died when he said “Tell me, are you an alpha carbon? Because you look susceptible to a backside attack.” I don't think I've ever seen so much win in one sentence xDD I had the same reaction as Roxas. :D

Yay for the man-pretty and this was totally awesome, cheered me up big time, thank you :)

You're an awesome writer, and I'm off to read more :3
Thank you for your awesomeness. ^^

fuss bucket--I almost died. I've called Roxas an angst bucket before but...that's just beautiful. Well, I absolutely loved this. It was really amusing and quite witty and just the thing I needed at 2 am. I'm also really glad Axel won :)

ak! this is so adorably cute and sexy in a way :D i love your writing style! keep up the good work, ne?

I love this story! Such a good plot, and really great writing as well! You're awesome! ^_^

Nice ^^

Uhuhuhuh WOW. Axels such a little schemer! I'd be afraid to have someone that sexy and diabolical trying to get into my pants! Poor Roxie trying to study his little butt off with such an enormous suave distraction hanging around! I pity and am jealous of him at the same time... I wish I had the effort in me to study more..

Great grammar and whatnot as usual =) A few long words in there. I'm gonna be honest and say I was a little lost at the philosophy part, but it worked in there great nonetheless! I love how you made me dislike studying slightly more, didn't think my attitude would change much. A deliciously cunning story (Is there going to be a continutation?) lolcakes) Great effort for a friend!

Haha, I laughed at the cheesy one liner about Bio-Chem Axel gave... for some reason with AU Akuroku stories, I like college settings the most. You kept them in very good character though, I also like when Roxas called Axel ugly and he said he was "Man-Pretty"

Jouzou, write more please.

yup he got that down to an art

Oh man, that was hilarious! When it started off with Axel having clearly in mind that he'd get Roxas to have sex with him, I snickered and already thought then that it'd be fun because Roxas wouldn't surely give in so easily! And, wow was it funny! Most definitely the bio-chem pickup line... god, trust Axel to come up with such stuff and to make Roxas nosebleed in his future bio-chem classes whenever someone mentions 'alpha carbon'... ha ha. But in the end Roxas just had to give in, since you don't mess with a scheming Axel :p

Very well done! I can only say what everyone else said; my cheeks are still hurting from the grinning, and I'll be off to Lala-land, imagining the next part of it now... heh. So much love for this ♥

Oh, I love you. I love you, I love you.
It made me smile when you sent it to me at first, and even more now when I read it over and see what you've added. Axel certainly -is- a scheming little brat, isn't he? You can't really blame him, though .. those two have a hard enough time keeping their hands to themselves when they have other things to do .. like when you're trying to study, and I innocently attempt to distract you.

Oh, that alpha carbon comment? PURE WIN. I laughed my freaking ass off, baby. This whole thing was so good, and it made me smile so much. It doesn't matter that it was meant to be done earlier -- just the fact that you finished it, and even thought to write something for me that makes me the happiest. You're such an amazing friend, and an amazing Roxas. You're everything I could ever hope for.

Thank you so, so much, love. I love you.

this was so cute!

aws that was cute 8D

Daw. That was funny.
Lolz.
Im glad you posted this.
I needed that.
Great job.

lol, that was... awesome ;)
such a great read, Axel is a hoot ^.^

I swear my cheeks hurt from smiling so much
I'm so tired, but of course that didn't make your story less enjoyable ^^ in fact I'm on a better mood.. yep, the effects of shonen ai *nods*
I've had this window open for the last 30 minutes and still don't know what to say, but I already feel bad 'cause I didn't review on your last story for lacking of anything to say so... yeah I still love your writing as much as I did before.. maybe even more, you've improved so much too and what can I say ...mhmm I really don't know ...well I hope to hear from you soon. ^^