Good story. Please continue it soon! It would be sad to see this abandoned.

I love this story!
It's one of the few Elfen Lied stories I've actually felt compelled to continue.

Update please!

Aw man over already! Damnit! you should continue this this... this fine work piece. But in the mean time could you leave some reviews on my E. Lied fic entitled "Lucy and the 4 Chelonian Saviours (take a guess at the crossover)", "The Diclonious and the Maverick Hunters chapters 1 and 2 (its still going)", "Elvin Lied's Armada", and "Evangelion's Armada". Read 'em over and tell me what you think of 'em please? They haven't gotten much buzz so help a guy out could you?

This is a amassing story, please don't discontinue this masterpiece. You would make me sad. :( You don't want to make this girl sad do you? I didn't think so. =^.^=

One of the few good Elfen Lied fics I've found with any length to it. Hope to see an update soon.

--Radgar

Pretty good fic so far. Please keep p the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

This is a great story, but please dear sweet god, UPDATE!

you know what i like about this story is that its your own story from elfen lied while keeping it in the kohta/nyu/lucy article and with the awsome way you keep it interesting with the tension but theres one thing wrong YOU NEED TO UPDATE!

Wow. This is a good story. I hope it gets updated soon, I really want to keep reading it. I pray that this one doesn't get neglected.

WHERE THE EFF IS KANAE!?

Moarh!

Great Story, a real departure from most alternate universe stories. I see lots of potential here. Personally, I'd like to see what happens when Lucy gets her vectors back. Something tells me Derek, Jeff are going to be in for hell at the hands of Lucy (and possibly an Uzi-weilding Kohta and/or Aiko

Hey you know what would be really kool... if you updated...lol

It is a really good story and I'm addicted now. Update soon so I can get my fix.

I really love this story X3 It has an interesting plot. Plus, you managed to take parts from the anime/manga, twist them to match your plot, and still keep my attention! None of it is over done, or something I've seen before. Its new, original, and wrote out perfectly.

Splendid job with keeping Lucy in character, too. It's probably extremely difficult to keep such a monotone (I think thats the right word) character in character for so long. There's so many things that excentric and humorous characters can do to make stories fun to read, but Lucy makes the story interesting and fun to read, because you're just waiting for her to show at least some emotion. (Loved it when she got scared after the horror film, that was priceless)

Probably, one of my favirate facts about this story is, you don't make Lucy trust Kohta (Did I spell that right?) as soon as he shows kindness towards her. It makes the character seem more real and life like, especially when you give a reason behind them not trusting such a caring person. (YAY! For a fanfic that doesn't have constant romance!)

Update soon, please, X3 I love this story to bits. I Subscribed to the story, so I better get a message about a new chapter soon XD Sorry for a dragged out review, heh heh, its my first one, its four in the morning, and I'm just writing the first thing that comes to mind ^^;;

--Sitani

Omg I love the idea behind this. It is so original, unlike every other Elfen Lied story. I mean it, it is all the same. Lucy come back hurt they doctor her up she and Kohta live happily ever after. Ah I'm tried of it all, but yours is so new I read the all 5 chapter in one sitting. Please update soon I don't know if I can stand it.