I thought this was very well written! I could tell you put a lot of love and had fun writing it; I felt it as I read! It's always nice to dip back into the SIP world; I miss my comics that are at my other house, but this is definitely just as good as the real story.

Great job! This is what writing is about!

Interesting pairing. It makes sense and it was so sweet.

Awwwww.

:(

Sad end, but a good fic. *thumbs up*

Aww. Nice scene. :D

Could be reincarnated loves. *lol* It happens a bit in fiction. Hell, SIP hinted that Katchoo and Francine might be Xena and Gabrielle. _

I liked this. update soon!

Looking good! :D It's been awhile since I read SIP, but the way you're writing them feels right. Keep up the good work!

I wonder why Cherry and Ai fell for each other so fast. It seems unlike Cherry.

Maybe because she had been following her and researching her, she subconsciously started to have feelings for Ai, which intensified when the two met.

There's hardly any fics of Cherry. Update!

Please continue this. There are not enough SIP fic and especially Cherry Hammer foscused ones!

Oh, interesting!

:)

I kinda wondered if Cherry might do something with Ai... Okay, that wasn't what I meant! *lol* _ I mean, either tell her or put her in a direction to find out herself.