This story makes me feel like everything I've ever written is inadequate in comparison. But I mean that as a good thing.

I LOVE this. First, I like that despite the fact that it's an AU story it's still seems completely in character and completely probable. Second, it just flows well. There's simply not a single second where it's not a pleasure to read. If that makes any sense.

Fabulous job! I'm now eagerly awaiting more of this as well as your Crellie:)

Sincerely,
Sarah

P.S. I hope you're having fun on your date;)

You're a really great writer! Great descriptions and imagery, love the plot. Hope there will be more posted soon. Also, if you need a beta reader (there are a few typo type mistakes here and there), I'm available. But other than those few typos, you are a fantastic writer!

This story is off to a great start. I like how their relationship is forming. Lookin' forward to some more =).


~Willow

Really good addition, I like that you included information about Jess' life and Rory's homesickness.

I'm glad you updated it! I am curious as to why Jess ended up being a cleaner, when he is so well-read. He could have attended a community college. Anyway, loving your story of Lorelai Gilmore and Jess Mariano.

:)

i really love it! please update soon.

very interesting, I can say i've never read a story before with this plot.

good chapter & more please

alright! that was good! i kinda feel weird with them being awkward all the time, but thatss ok, at least they're together! ee he he he update soon please! i want to get to the good stuff!

I was so excited when I saw that this had been updated. I'd just yesterday given it up as an abandoned story, so I'm very pleased to find that it isn't.

I love the fact that despite it being an AU world, Jess is still very much in character. Paris is hilarious. The plot is something new and interesting that I haven't seen before, so well done you.

This chapter could probably do with a quick edit, 'cos there were quite a few grammar/spelling mistakes (is it Rick or Rock?), but otherwise, I'm loving it.

Very cute start, please contin u

Really good, I'm excited for the next update. Thanks for writing it!

really good job! i loved it :) please continue

Great start! Can't wait to read the rest.

I like this story, I almost always enjoy AU stories just 'cause it gives everything a different spin. :)
But I think it's spelled Lorelai. Not Lorelei.
Update son! I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job on everything. :)