Ooh, looking forward to seeing where this goes! Looking good so far. :)

Aww... I gotta say I've thought about Saix as this. Poor Demmy, hope Axel will help him.
Wondering if they're gonna be more than friends?
Anyway, keep up with it!

Hope you don't mind me putting you to alert so I know when you continue!

...Over and out...
AkuDemyfan

P.S.
Could you check my stories, please? Even if you don't I will still keep an eye on your story and read and review when I can!
Thank you!

Oh dear... that's terrible.

No, I mean, your writing amazes me as always, but Saix takign advantage of something poor Demyx can't control... but I suppose without guilt, Saix wouldn't really care now would he? I should probably have known the moment I read the title, but...

That said, I did like Axel's analogy of Demyx's self esteem and Xigbar's blind eye. That was the redeeming point for the happiness level of this story.

I'd leave a more comprehensive review, but I'm in an airport with limited internet connection that is about to die, and my plane is leaving in a little while, so I must leave you with this horrible review.

As a last note, I do like how you put quotations around the emotions that the nobodies are remembering. I tmade them seem less human and moe like the emotionless being's they're supposed to be. The only part that I disliked (as a personal thing. It wasn't wrong by any means and made sense in the story, it just tugged at my heartstrings) was the quotations around friends. Mostly because it sucks to think that they can't have friends. Its just a sad reminder.

- Kitsune Alchemist