This was a great story! I could totally see an episode happening just like this...eh, well except we wouldn't have gotten to see the good parts i.e. kissing! :)

hee! *squirms with glee*

Great story! So sad that Vala died, but what a story all around it. Just to try to guess if she was a ghost or real made it a page-turner. Good explanation, too. Would make Sam proud.

Thanks so much for writing!
CindyLou

What a great fic. Really enjoyed and very well written.

Awesome story,loved the funny parts, the sad parts, the 'hot steamy' parts...:P Loved all of it.

Loved it! Jack was priceless. I really liked poor Caroyn's verbal missteps, no wonder she had to give up and leave. I also liked that Sam & Jack left together.

Did Daniel have any reason to tell V that her getting pregnant was impossible? I doubt if he would use protection when he had sex with a ghost. And I doubt if he really understood the physics involved in her phase shifting enough to be sure it was impossible! So perhaps a follow up story would be in order.

very very cute. I like the ending. ;) well done and lot of fun. "out of phase baby" what a riot!

Leave it to Teal'c to come back with the Grand entrance. You can see from all her teammates how concerned they were for Vala and her recovery. Daniel certainly made it clear how much he feels for Vala by being there every minute at her bedside. Dr. Lam should of known better at Vala being bored for so long. Where is would she go, other than to see Daniel. It was pure fun to know where the rest of their friends knew where Vala was. I think Vala also wants reassurance from Daniel that he still loves her, and I think making love to her is one way she can feel even closer to Daniel. After all, he's the only who did beleive in her, even though he couldn't fathom how. Lovely ending. :D

I love how flustered Carolyn got at the end there; I'm sure the blushing had nothing to do with Cam being there. Anyway, wonderful D/V story!

Awesome ending! Now you have to write one with Daniel, Vala, and offspring!

Poor Carolyn, she certainly got tongue tied at the end there. ;)

And I must say, Vala certainly did have an interesting question there. I can just picture them, that is Vala, asking Sam and Carolyn the possibilities while Daniel is trying to hide. ;)

“Blah, blah, blah. Carter! English. We speak English on this base!”

That was one of the best Jack lines!

Loved the ending. Loved the whole story. Thanks!

Loved the very last part. Well done. You had me worried at first, with Vala dead and all but alls well in the end. Thank you.

John Stone

A great story putting our favorite couple through their paces. Even though they had a rough ride through this one...they surely showed love is a powerful force, not to be ignored! Well done !;)

*sigh* I wouldn't be waking in to that room at the end, hehe! Lovely wrap up to a fun and sometimes tense story. *whispers* ...and thanks to C for getting B her new beta! Had to sneak that in somewhere ;) So... next? - C