if only he knew that bella was in there too. or is she? idk. but good chapter for the first chapter for edwards pov

hey:) i really like the idea of your story, it's nice to read it and i'm very interested how it will develop!

biology, mh...i guess edward will be with bella in this class lol.

looking forward to the next chap and i'm curious to find out if jake or edward will get bella.

This is great! With the introduction chapter and then leading into the 3 POVs, just amazingly visual and I really like being in everyone's head. I love what you have done with the characters, they are all so involved, not just one dimensional. It is really, really great!

Wow! I just wanted to say that this is one of the most visual chapters I have read! The way you presented eveyone to the reader, was perfect. Awesome job!

good. ya bella thinks more than jake but then again jake is jake. lol.

First period, boring. Second period, annoying. Third period, hard. Fourth period, dumb. Fifth period, useless. Then, lunch. Lunch is good.

And haven't we all had days like that? I get the feeling, though, that Jake's attitude to school is always a bit like that.

Are we ever going to learn the answers to the various aspects of Jasper's situation? Or are they going to remain one of those insoluble mysteries?

She really was my dream girl. Sadly, that's where she always was, in my dreams. I hated to admit it, but my dreams of Bella were not always the purest. What could I do though? I was a almost seventeen year old boy who had a crush on an older girl.

*Cackles*

Great chapter, as always :) Whose POV is next, have you decided? Cinnamon.

This seems to be the beginning of another wonderful story. Do I dare hope another Jacob/Bella great love story? Yay Team Jacob...

I like Bella's POV :)

Good job on this story I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter now... hahahaha

and also wondering if Bella will be with Edward or Jacob in this story!

Well, I'm sure in time i will find out :D

They had been arguing about this since we sat down to eat. If people didn't know us, I swear they would have thought they are together.

It was kind of coming across as a lovers' spat, actually. Alice and Emmett, though. That would be too weird.

“Come on, Alice, she has a chance against Victoria, Lauren, and Jessica. But Rosalie and Leah? Come on now.”

Good to see Emmett hasn't changed much. Still no tact :)

Loved the chapter. Please update soon. Cinnamon.

nice. i cant wait to see what happens next

WOW

I really love how you wrote this!

The perspective it's in is very interesting!

Update soon :D

That was quick :) Love the title, it's perfect. I read it again, and I still love it.

And again, I love these lines:

He can be found in the theatre department. He is the president, after all. No, girls, Jasper is not gay. Just moody. And too beautiful for his own good.

Most people think of him as scarily handsome. But, in reality, he is just scary.

Good luck with finishing I Will Be, and can't wait for the next installment of this story. Cinnamon.