 Drop Your Oboe 5/3/09 . chapter 1Not bad. Sweet, and quiet, and not overdone. I don't see much of that, and I like it. Thanks, and well done.
Your writing is very controlled- you get your point across clearly and concisely, not too histrionically, not too flowery. It's simple. Quiet, like I said. With this, it works nicely. Also it gave me a chance to use "histrionic" in a sentence. I don't think I've ever done that before.
Beck and call, not beckoned are these, within the show? |