I've just read this fanfic, and, comparing the two I've read about Alice and Jasper's story, this one is clearly the best.
Are you going to update it?
I'm just asking because you haven't updated any of you fanfics since November... And almost half of them since August...
I know you've been busy with your book (I check the blog), but isn't there any way of updating your fanfics?
I'm sure I'm not the only one begging for updates...
Please...
Bye!

why do you quit writing when things get too exiting thats unfortunate

I really like this story! It's great to hear a different couple's perspective. I can't wait to read Jasper's polite shock when he finally encounters Alice. Please write more on this story! Thanks so much for your creativity!!

wow!I love this!!update soon!!

this, like all your other stories, is incredable! you are a fantastic writer! absolutly amazing!

Where does your brain come up with these ideas? It's completely unfathomable.

hello i'm patrica and i absolutely love this story and do wish u continue it

Don't stop the chapter on a cliff hanger. - sarcasm- You are now one of my most favorite authors. Hell - ditch this site and write your own book! I'll buy it, I'll buy twenty copies!

This chapter was superb. I've never read a fanfiction before that captures Esme's personality and describes the moment before her 'death' so well. It gave me goose bumps. I absolutely loved it.
Can't wait to see what you have Alice do next.
Thanks - fantastic chapter! :)

Haha I loved reading your description of Alice's first hunt! Especially that her first thought was to scream. I loved that part. Thanks for the chapter! :)

That chapter was mind-blowing. The part where it is in Esme's point of view was so well written, it almost brought me to tears. The only reason it didn't was because I knew she didn't actually die. And Alice seems to be doing remarkably well for herself considering her circumstances. I am very excited to read what you plan next for our favorite little pixie.

Very good. You had me hooked when I read Esme's POV. There aren't many stories that I've seen that actually have Esme's story as a part of it, even if just a small part. please keep writing! This story is excellent. It's very well written, with no visible mistakes. Well done.

plz plz update!! this is good!!

Poor Alice... having to witness Esme's misery!! :( So sad!
Thank goodness we know that life gets happier for Alice!

Very interesting chapter, especially Alice not understanding what Carlisle is doing. Though having Esme use the term "out of body experience" was a little cliche, in my opinion.