|Reviews for Paradise|
| Insomniac Owl 11/10/12 . chapter 1
This is wonderful, really. Better than some episodes, even - the characters are perfectly drawn, the situation compelling - I can't wait to see how the different strands tie together - or break apart in the face of something bigger than the department has ever faced before.
| Pilotofmymind 2/23/11 . chapter 1
Oooh wow. Ronnie was so amazing. You have everyone so IC.
Do want more. Please.
Hope some day to see more
| Honza 11/17/09 . chapter 1
That was awesome! I have been Shield-hungry ever since I finished the episodes, but this brings it back! You have all the characters working, talking like they used to...oh my, I just cant wait till next part!
| GestaltConscience 11/11/09 . chapter 1
Good stuff, I'm currently in the process of sweeping my scribbled drafts into my first submitted shield-inspired story and really hope I have the same feel for the characters as yourself.
| Duzzle 9/10/09 . chapter 1
| Bicbic 6/23/09 . chapter 1
Nice story, very well written. I hope you intend to continue it
| Yammy1983 5/27/09 . chapter 1
a new "the shield"-story!
can't wait for more...
| CAIA CAECILIA 5/9/09 . chapter 1
SUPER START PLEASE CONTINUE
| Vanus Empty 5/8/09 . chapter 1
This is interesting. I'm liking it a lot so far, so, I'm gonna alert it. ;) Please, update again, soon preferably!