This is wonderful, really. Better than some episodes, even - the characters are perfectly drawn, the situation compelling - I can't wait to see how the different strands tie together - or break apart in the face of something bigger than the department has ever faced before.

Oooh wow. Ronnie was so amazing. You have everyone so IC.

Do want more. Please.

Hope some day to see more

That was awesome! I have been Shield-hungry ever since I finished the episodes, but this brings it back! You have all the characters working, talking like they used to...oh my, I just cant wait till next part!

Good stuff, I'm currently in the process of sweeping my scribbled drafts into my first submitted shield-inspired story and really hope I have the same feel for the characters as yourself.

OH nice.

Nice story, very well written. I hope you intend to continue it

a new "the shield"-story!

can't wait for more...

SUPER START PLEASE CONTINUE

This is interesting. I'm liking it a lot so far, so, I'm gonna alert it. ;) Please, update again, soon preferably!