Awwwwwweeee, that was ardorable! BB was my favorite in Teen Titans! Really great and very awesome!

AW

this is adorable, i loved it even though it was short (not that thats a bad thing or anything...)

nice one

short and sweet

love this part:

“So…what do you miss about her?”

“I dunno. Everything.”

“Wanna be a bit more specific?”

“Her voice, her hair, her telling me that I’m an idiot, her sarcasm. Everything.”

I'll be honest: nothing happens... Wait a minnit, is he with STARFIRE? *snigger*. I'm not insulting you, by the way, but being with Starfire is a really odd idea...okay, I guess something does happen, after all.

This isn't bad, i don't see anything wrong with it. Is there gonna be another chapter?

You admitted from the onset that it was really bad. And not to be cruel, but it is.

There is too much dialouge and no substance around it. How does Raven react to the call? There is no imagery, and no conclusion.

Don't let this review be discouraging, let it bring out your perfectionist, let yourself bloom.

Ask yourself when your done, is it worth reading?

Cheers

-Joe

Very nice, very short, easy to read and it's a BB/Rae! That's what I call a great short story! Keep on writing! :)