I really liked the battle between bitter/gentle here. It came through very nicely. I also like the image of bleeding color, but that's fairly easy to like.

I've noticed that you hook onto one image or line and rely on it heavily to carry through an entire piece, which could be good or bad, but in this case I was almost inclined to say just not enough.

Either way, I think that you write very well. The lines/images you choose are very powerful. And I look forward to more of your work.

Excellent work with playing on the color symbolism. It really did help to signify how bland and dry Cloud--and, in the same vein, Tifa's life--has become. It was just so sad in that aspect.

Another well-written piece.

~Koky

this is different but i liked it a lot

This was amazing, in a sad sort of way. The focus on colours made the imagery very vivid. Poor Tifa. Enjoyed it a lot.

geez, cloud, have a heart!

this is truly great, like seriously, i really like it.

update soon, pleez? i givez you cheezburger, you gives me next chapter??

i think its a good deal, at least XD

- Sarah

Cloud, you gloriously spiky asshole.

Heartwrenchingly written. Nice.