Hey I love the story but u need to pay more attention to the series. Yuzu is the one that can't see ghosts and Karin can. Karin is the one with high spiritual pressure out of the both of them. And yuzu can barely see ghosts. But other wise it was very good. 4/5

This nicely written, and shows a lot of talent. Detail, emotion... All beautiful.

But in all honesty it would have been...better if Isiabella hadn't been her name ;

This was wonderfully written. YOur writing style is well formed and I truly enjoyed reading this. The description of Isabella's anguish was tangible as I read this story. You have a quite a talent. Keep it up!