its good plz upgrde soon

I really like this story. I love how you portray Lucien. Good job and keep up the good work!

I like this. A lot. Chica, this is the one Lucien story I've read that I actually like. He's actually a sexy, cocky beast and that. Is. Hot. Thank you so very much xo<3

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Yayayayayayay! Ilove this storryy!! Update!

Great piece so far, exciting. Not like other Oblivion writing pieces out there. Kept the personality of Lucien right it seems. Can't wait for the next update!

GAH this is awesome! *would like more* Hee.

(Finally got around to reviewing! Hooray!)
Now surely I shouldn't have to tell you that I like this, because I like just about every one of your Oblivion stories. As per usual, your writing is fluid and descriptive, without being overly so, and paints a vivid picture of everything that's going on. But then, I've come to expect that standrad of perefction from you.
Lucien is...different than what I've read, certainly lustier - but somehow still accurately portrayed. And Eloe is also very well done; it's quite hard to pin her down as any one thing - by which I mean it would be hard to describe her. But that's a good thing, shows she's complex and intricate.
The only problem I have is with the ending, because it isn't an ending at all. But if you say you don't want to write Stonebriar anymore...well, I can understand that. Heavens knows I've started dozens of stories and simply lost the will to complete them. And I do know that writing, like most creative things, happens only when it wants to - if you're not in the mood for it, it 'aint getting done. Therefore, I don't blame you for putting the story on hiatus.
I do hope it gets finished one day, though. It'd be a shame if it stayed imcomplete.
ReaperRain

I know leaving a review is pretty pointless now, since you no longer want to write, but I really wanted to leave some feedback to such an awesome story.

I have never seen such a strange plot before, its really fascinating. The way you portray Lucien Lachance though is just simply…wow XD Its so like him. I must have seen a hundred different portrayals of him but yours is just right. Eloe is a refreshing change to an OC too.

You have fleshed out the main characters so well! Your writing is excellent. If you ever published a novel I would definitely read it ^-^ Good luck with your books, I do hope you will continue this someday.

You don't want to write it anymore? That's really a shame. It's one of my favorite stories, fanfic or no, ever.

I do hope you'll change your mind, Eloe's too good a character to let go unwritten!

oh...

wow...

this is fascinating i can't wait for more!

so her mother's coming for a visit? that should be intresting i can't wait for more to come please update soon!

~MP

No! Don't you...stop writing this, AHHGG! I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I hate you! Because I LOVE this story and I want to see how it ends!

I really like this story. It has a different perspective on DB and that's refreshing. I am also enjoying your writing style. I am eager to read more and hope you update a new chapter soon.

I'm really sad that you are not going to work on this story any longer, because this is such a delightful story. And the plot just begs to be written. Hope you can get back to this one sometime in future. :)

I think I love you. Upload not one, but THREE perfect chapters? YOU ARE AWESOME.

And:

"and the pain he’d been in—hell, the pain he was in—wasn’t the sort of trifling thing that just /buggered off/."

Best quote EVER. xD

"And if she met his gaze, she’d end up sending him unconscious messages like /want to find out how sturdy my table is/ and that was not the sort of thing that would be at all good for her peace of mind."

*DIES* That one made me burst out laughing. At five in the morning. While people were sleeping. xD

"Her /mother/ was coming /here/? On one of her bloody minded unannounced attempts to convince her into having babies with the next male to cross her path? /While her assassin was still in the house/?

“Oh bugger.”"

... Perfect. Just perfect. I think I've died again. xD

Update again soon! I long to know what happens next! This is going to be so precious... *Mad giggle fit*

The interactions between Eloe and Lucien made a great read. They are funny and yet still believable. And I can begin to see how the pairing could work. She is quite a match for Lucien. :) Good to see him being his usual charming self. :D