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TraSan 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Oof. Well captured!
sweetysmart0505 5/24/09 . chapter 1
Man, first Dean now Sam, afraid of his own reflection. Those lies are going to kill me, let alone them! Great job on this.
amyblair 5/16/09 . chapter 1
Awesome, Awesome.

I'm writing a little something right now and I just finished the chapter where I talk about Sam and his... cravings. You did this so well in such a small amount of time. Love the howling with a hollow hunger. I think that happens to me every time I think of Oatmeal Creme Pies... yum.. Anyway, I LOVED the fist into the mirror, LOVED the splinters and cracks chasing each other.

A thing of beauty, this is.
Mad Server 5/10/09 . chapter 1
Poor, conflicted Sam.
CatBeist 5/10/09 . chapter 1
Oh like this one, very nice use of the word!
LivingForTv 5/7/09 . chapter 1
Oh good, I sure hope this week's episode has Dean planted outside that door. I haven't seen it yet but this HAS to happen! Good of you to give it to me otherwise.
csigurl-101 5/7/09 . chapter 1
wow...This is really good for something so short!
Nana56 5/6/09 . chapter 1
Wow! Nicely done. You made the challenge word fit perfectly and creatively into the current situations on SN.

Great job!
vonnie836 5/4/09 . chapter 1
So sad, Sammy addicted to demon blood, hating himself but unable to quit. Excellent drabble. Hugs, Vonnie
1983Sarah 5/4/09 . chapter 1
You can't help but feel sorry for Sam. He must really be torn about the whole situation.
NC Girl 5/4/09 . chapter 1
Loved the double entendre! It fit in perfectly and added quite a punch to the entire drabble. I also really liked this little bit of description"...watching splinters and cracks chase each other.
Fantastic drabble.
Cookie6 5/4/09 . chapter 1
God, Ness, I can feel Sam's addiction through this powerful, intense drabble. The battle between what Sam knows and what he feels just rockets out of your words. Your analogies of the splinters and cracks is amazing, and your aliteration puts the emotion into the images perfectly.

I would smile and wave but I can't seem to get myself out of the the corner where I have been cringing for most of Season 4..."Tripped no kidding Sam, totally. Clever, Ness, very clever.
Vampyvii 5/4/09 . chapter 1
Yeah Sam's slipped pretty far- One can only hope he feels so bad about it- Good one!
ziggy.uk 5/4/09 . chapter 1
We have only just seen On The Head Of A Pin here, so have seen Sam drinking Ruby's demon blood but not what you guys have seen. Sounds like he's a bit of an addict, damn that Ruby. And the lies just trip from his lips so easily now(
mssammydean 5/3/09 . chapter 1
Oh Sam... *huggles* You're right. You shouldn't be drinking it! You should kill Ruby for giving it to you in the first place
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