You pulled this off beautifully. I wasn't sure how you were going to fix it, but for a moment everything was okay. I really loved the first two lines. Very vivid and true to the story!

Love John's hands on Dean's back and chest.

Phoebe

Amazing, the two pieces that make Dean whole. I love this.

Very nice.

sid

Nice! Love that this is a tag to Shadows! Beautiful image of John "pressing" him back together...

i liked the use of this weeks word

*.* Aww! See, this is the kind of drabble I've been needing so badly! I love seeing the three of them together and loving and safe, even just for one tiny moment. Nicely done : D

I love, unfailingly, fics that deal with this scenario, so hooray you for writing one. Poor Dean, always caught in the middle. You captured it so well. The first line, using the drabble prompt, begins it perfectly.

Oh. And this? 'If I owned them, my excitement might cause some sort of small earthquake.'

I kind of think you're adorable *nods*

This is nice. Waves from pit.

Very, very good job and beautifully written. Another winner!