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RonHeartbreaker
2009-06-06 . chapter 5
Cute twist there with the guard. And the reciprocal head slaps.
RonHeartbreaker
2009-06-06 . chapter 3
This exchange really made me smile:

“Um…breaking the laws of man and God and getting involved in things man was not meant to know?”

“Oh, very well, just as long as you’re not staying too late at the mall.”
Katsumara
2009-06-05 . chapter 6
Great chapter! You know what? I completely missed that Kim had James right out of high school, but the signs were there in 'Soccer Moms' as you said that she was twenty-five there, and James was seven. I guess that means in 'Earth Day', Kim and Ron are about thirty-one-ish? I dunno why I always want to know ages. I guess so I can picture them in my head, Haha.

Also, it just hit me, but I notice how Kim seems to be missing in a couple of these James/Cindy stories. A shame. I'm sure she'd be a lot of fun with the kids doing what they are doing. That and if she spotted them in that position, she wouldn't ever let go. She may even go with the Anne Possible route.

The kids don't know that Ron's not as clueless as he used to be. Clueless, sure.. but not as bad. Either way, I can't wait for your next chapter!
eoraptor
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
Okay, terror birds at the wedding, that's a story I'd like to read *snerts* but monique and ned? gah, and I thought my Bonnie and cousin Larry was the worst crackship. Looking forward to the next as always
screaming phoenix
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
Yeah it’s really good that someone in that house is clueless about what is happening in that room. I expect it will take them both awhile to understand who is the clueless ones however.

I can’t wait to see just what these two dream up. The conception story; priceless.
JCS1966
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
Two things from this chapter struck me;

*James story of how he was conceived; as if the kids weren't scarred enough with the invisibilty incident and the disco nightmare at the museum...

*Ron may be clueless sometimes, but he has enough experience to know there's something special about the kids that enen they don't know...yet.

So we're gonna meet the gang soon? Ready for the next installment!
Captain IT
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
I can see Ron singing now:

Oh what a night
Late December back in 2003
Was a very special night for me
As I remember what a night

( James and Cindy): Eugh


Keep it KP real

Captain IT
Mr. Wizard
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
More sweet and funny stuff. Love the 'where you come from story'
bigherb81
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
Enjoyable couple of chapters there really good stuff. I'm curious as to which animal or animals they're going to be reanimating. And I do feel that they paid their price for this experiment. I mean bad enough he was dancing the least he could have done was keep his shirt on. I do think they need to be careful though parents are never as 'clueless' as you think. I was shocked to find out how much crap I did that my mom actually knew about. Great job once again.
Sentinel103
2009-06-04 . chapter 6
yep parents are so clueless aren't they kids. Ahh UI remember when the boy was growing up...OPs I'd better leave that one alone.


Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)
screaming phoenix
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
Oh the horror of it all! Cindy might need glasses, and that dancing guard. It’s about a 9.8 on the wrongsick scale! The equal opportunity punishment dished out to each other was amusing and the reasons; dead on perfect! Yeah they paid for it big time. Now they just need some industrial strength brain soap for the after effects.
Reader101w
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
very funny chapter.

at least these little criminals got their punishment.

I hope to read more of this story soon

keep up the good writing,
reader101w
Katsumara
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
Haha. Great chapter! Keep up the great work!
mr. wizard
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
Horror indeed. Very very funny, and I dread to see what went wrong. After all, Ron's and Drakken's genes are involved here.
JCS1966
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
After what they saw, they should've just dropped the whole deal and done something with paper-mache'...LOL

I'm still lovingthese kids. Ready for the next installment!
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