that was beautiful why did he leave her sounds like they both fell for each other

All the previous?

this was amazing! i'm gona go read the story now! and i hope there's more of this j/a in it, they are so great. love the strong silentness of jasper, so sexy.

This is probably a little late, but you haven't written he next one yet, so I thought, what the hell.

A) How Edward fell in love with Bella.

I'm dying for more of Sin City! D:

How Jasper took to bella becoming a stripper? Pleeease?

I love this story, it's addictive.

That was sweet.

Since I am undeniably in love with the Panther, I'd like to think that what he did fir Rosalie would make a good next out take. Love this!

it should be a-hello?

i love your story sin city, and i love this little outtake on how jasper met alice.
i would give you my right arm if you did the outtake for how bella met edward and how they fell in love because i've always wanted to see that.
pretty pretty please :)
could you please let me know if you are and i promise to review!
good luck ;)
xoxo

I think the next outtake should be A

when are you going to post the next outtake?

I would love to see option B for the next outtake. How Jasper took to Bella becoming a stripper. I think it would be nice to seem more overprotective Jasper. ;)

Thanks for the great outtake. I love your Jasper and I'd like to read about his favor for Rose.

I really loved Sin City which is saying a lot considering that I'm a Rosalie/Emmett fan. But for your story i couldn't wait to reach the last chapter. And i automatically went to see if you had some outtakes and voila, here it was. I was wondering if you thought about doing an outtake of Rosalie and Emmett getting some closure or something cause by the story I doubt you're going to get them back together. But who knows you might surprise us. Well its been a long time since you updated this story but maybe you'll still be willing to. Great Story.

I just found the outtakes and I hope you will update them. :)

I was really curious from the beginning of Sin City how Edward fell in love with Bella so I wish that this will be the outtake but I will be happy with either. :)

I would like to see first "How Edward fell in love with Bella" then second I would like to see a future later than the epilogue with Jasper and Alice maybe happy? and them Emmett and Rosalie work things out. Is that too much? Just some ideas.