Yeah! that was cool!
What's with you and dramatic beginnings? I sense something fishy going on...
I really liked the Joy to the world joke. Classic... I liked how she grumbled 'piffles' in the end as well.

Just one thing two say with this line...

'He smiled reassuringly, “your secret it is safe with me,” as if six words were all that was required to make her feel at ease again.'

that was seven words!!

anyways, I thought it was great. I'll be tuning till next time

Woow!
really intense lol! Only criticism is that it was too short
:( Write more! lol
I like the style of writing you've used, it is very addicting.

Poor Kisara. I feel really bad for her. Update soon.

Good luck with exams and I pity Kisara. The universe usually is unjust. Anyways, awesome job! Please update soon!
-d101

YAY! An update! I can't wait for the next chapter! This one was very good!

Can't wait for your update!

P.S. I know how exams suck. Purs is in 2 weeks and the teachers are piling on the work right bfore exams. :(


Autumn ^_^

DAMN you right good! I hope you Update this Quicker XD hehe Nice chapter!

I would hate to be the new girl at School. At least she knows one person here it makes it all the better. lol. Also why is she called a different name than Kisara? Anyways Great job and Update soon.

Wow, I love how th story flows hope you update soon :)

Yay an update! Loved this chapter! I hope you update ASAP! I wanna know what happens next! ^_^

Great job!

Autumn

Cool. At least she has one friend there. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101

Interesting. I hope her mother doesn't attack her later. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-d101

This is a good start. I wonder why her mom has to be like that. update soon.

Oh my! How sad!

Extremely well written chapter! I really enjoyed! I hope you update soon! I am eager to read more!

Update ASAP! This is going to be a great story!

Autumn ^_^

This was a sad chapter Kisara's mother is so mean!! I hope you update I really wanna know what happens next! UPDATE SOON!