I just read the story. I loved it. Please update soon!

This story is actually really promising.

Keep it coming! :)

(Sorry for my nitpicky comment in the previous chapter, i was just trying to help!)

Its Alienville... not Allenville.

You, as a writer should know that or at least look it up.

excellant story babes, cant wait for chapter 3

of couse he is one hot guy could see what she sees in him love this story

maria

like whee this is going

maria

hey, i just read it, good start, i liked, have you started on chapter 2 already?