Rather interesting story so far! I've watched a little bit of Black Lagoon, and replacing the original characters with Nanoha Characters is really interesting! :D

Please update soon! Ja ne! :D

YAY! You updated!!^-^ THX!! Can't wait what happens next!!

awesome fanfic is awesome!
update soon :D

hey welcome back!! this is interesting...nanoha is not suzuka's friend, i guess ;P update soon!

Nice work! Keep it up!

two heavly armed maids can be ooc idont mind still im glad you wrote more i like this story

o...very interesting!Please continue...T-T...
I'm BEGGING YOU!! ^-^

cool! definitely different ;P will they have powers or just be secret service kinda guys? anyway, please cont!

Another MGLN/Black Lagoon? This is starting to become a popular crossover. Characters have been switched around this time, though. I still think Nanoha makes a better Balalaika than Rock, but eh.

cool start. poor Nanoha leaving the old life she once lead for a more dangerous one

cool, a yuri vers. of black lagon ^^