That was just too cute for words. I can see Watari doing that and I loved the backstory you came up with for his death. It was both IC and inventive a rare find. And more than that, the whole fic was IC and funny! *laughs* How Watari-ish to do such a thing and then not think about how to get DOWN. I loved that Hakushaku was the one to pull him out of the water Hakushaku doesn't get much attention in fandom and it's nice to see him get a nod. Poor 003 she must have thought her human was seriously touched in the head to do that (if she didn't already) _

More is always appreachiated XD

lovely and fun. XD

Whee! What fun (you know, I'd thought plane crash for Watari too, but not the 'his fault' bit, that's clever). A nice sequel.

I liked this a lot, though not as much as "Fledglings". Still, Watari-san is exquisitely described, his motivations, his curiosity and his drive. I would love to read more from you! ;D

I *love* the way you describe Watari! Seriously, you will write the third part, won't you, you will, right, ne, ne, NE? x] I cannot wait for it! Seriously, you write so lovely Watari-fics, and I'm very curious of the possible third part (if you haven't realized that yet)... Keep up the good work!

Adorable! I love the way you write Watari. This was a very charming fic. Great job!

If you so desire, by all means write a third part!
Yeah, you're right, I haven't seen very many stories about Watari or Meifu..

You do such a good job! Keep writing!

Watari is completely and utterly adorable. The way you write is completely in character, zany, brillant, and hysterically funny. Please write about his lady friend, it would be nice to see a female shinigami for once.

This story and Fledglings was very interesting indeed. The things you thought up about Watari and his death were very believeable and fascinating. My favorite part was when he fell, that was very well written, I liked your style.

I'm off course all in favour of a sequel, but unfortunately I don't read het. The mention of her though small as it was was my least favorite part. But I'd be very interested in reading a sequel so please place a het-warning on it, so I'll know I have to skip at least part of it. _

Whee! I was hoping to find more and here it was already there for me to read. Wonderful, just like the last definitely something Watari-chan would do. Wonderful. *pause, cute voice* More, please.

Awwww that was so cute! I love the way you write Watari! His giggling was the best part and the twist at the end with Hakushaku-dono was brilliant and unexpected. You also write 003 very well. I can just picture the expression on his face as he stares at Watari's strange actions sometimes. Great job as always!

Wow, that was FUN
Please, please, another part !

I love the way you write Watari !

Well, that's no constructive criticism but... juste go on

Ah! Watari's such a sweetheart!:squishes his cheeks I loved the way you captured his personality in this one! _ Nice job!

Probably the best Watari POV fics I've read so far. _ Really, really nice and IC. Thanks for sharing them!

*L* Oh, very cute. V Please do write that third part!