This is a really interesting story!
Can't wait to read more!

It was quite a relief, this was the moment he had been waiting for since he learned she was declared Wicked. He can escape with her and support her.
^^ So willing to be the hero... even when it's not that neccesary.

By the looks of things, that’s the same dress you wore to see the Wizard when you were still at Shiz,
^^ I actually don't think those two dresses are meant to be the same. The Act II dress is longer and fuller... but she probably had to do some alterations to it, so maybe. I DO think Fiyero's Gale Force unifrom and his Scarecrow costume are supposed to be the same set of clothes.

“Congratulations on your engagement, and I’m sorry for not letting you catch me.”
^^ Was that meant to be innuendo or is it just me? Capture her now, Yero... push her 'gainst the wall!

The best he managed was to take one of her hands in one of his and kissed it lightly.
^^ Or not.

I love Fiyero. So my favorite character. And I mean without the sexy tribal markings/tight pants. Though those are good too.

Great update, Riti. I'm excited for this.
xoxox
Tiggy

This is really interesting! I'm excited to see where this is heading! Update soon :)

This sounds really interesting. Poor Dillamond, but I'm curious! Can't wait for an update

Very interesting turn of events here and I really look forward to how it will all play out. SOunds like there will there be Fiyeraba...? (I hope!)

I am already SO excited for this because I love this particular what if: what if Elphaba never saw Dillamond after Wonderful...

And very well written!

xoxox
Tiggy