wow, this is really good. i wish peter would knock on my window and take me to neverland!love your writeing! j

cool. for a sec i thought that she was saying goodbye to Peter

cool, very cool

I command you to WRITE MORE!

I felt bad for not reviewing before, so here I is! :D

I really like your concept of having a modern girl and PP not knowing what she's all about XD I'm really interested to see the lost boys' reactions to her :) One thing I can advise is watching your sentence structure, as sometimes they're a bit too long and they ramble a bit, and you might want to pace yourself a bit better. I can tell you really enjoy writing this, though, because I tend to rush when I'm all anxious over typing as fast as I can XD. Just work on your descriptions a bit more. You have a flair for writing as someone who's easy to relate to, and I think this is going to be a really popular fic. Keep going! :)

~chellybaby ^_^ xo

Aww! Although I thought the chapter was pretty short, it was really cute and sweet. If any of this ever happened to you (not like it ever would) this is probably what would happen. I love it! Update soon :)

I really like your story...please update soon but please could you make the chapters a bit longer!?! :)

please dont get discouraged! i really like your story, true im about peter pan and luv all pp stories,but i like yours especally! plz write more asap.

I like this story, It reminded me of a time, that actually happened to me, I saw Peter Pan.
No joke

This story is awesome! It's so cute!! :D I love the bit with Peter and Dana tracing his freckles... :D XD <3 its awesome. Write more!

wow. your a pretty crappy writer, aren't you?

aw, peter has freckles! This story seems really sweet, can't wait to read what happens!

love love love it write more please

I love it! Keep the chapters coming! There is nothing else better to read.

I FEEL SO BAD!because there are actually two other authors who commented... im sorry! it was kinda late when i wrote that