u know slippy full name is slippy toad not slippy frog...unless u dont know about it and it is ur first time. nice chapter update more thank you

the whole thing had a few spelling mistakes.I still love this story though,its exceedingly awesome!I could never come up with the fantastic characterizations you came up with,or the feelings.I LOVE THIS!!

Since I didn't review the last chapter, and these two are the same lolol, I'll do it now.
This is coming along brilliantly! The writing's awesome, Andross and Pepper are done well, and it's good to see Star Fox finally get together. So yeah, ANOTHER GOOD ONE!

That was'nt too bad at all! Should be interesting to see how you pan this out, especially since you're taking in the canon aspects of the very first game.
Looking forward to the next chapter!